|
Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 18, 2005 23:48:46 GMT -4
Hey yall this is my first story with all the forums i be on but ne wayz i don need any cast but if you wanna do a guest appearence just ask.
y/n was a regular girl livin in Las Vegas. she had many compliments on how pretty she was but no one actually liked her. She had only a little true friends that stuck by her side.The day she found out she was moving way across the states to her uncles she was excited but sad cause she had to leave her friends. Little as she knew her life would change for the worst and then the good.
y/m: guess wut y/n y/n: wut am i babysittin again y/n: no uncle jamie wants you to move wit him cause he is graduating college and he dont want to be alone y/n:wut !!! im goin to atl omg mom ive always wanted to go there maybe ill have a better chance of meeting b5 y/m: wut r u waitin for your leaving 2morrow y/n: wut omg god ma u not gonna give me a chance 2 say good bye to my friends y/m: well u got a chance right now y/m: ok let me hurry i got clothes to pack and peeps to see
I walked slowly down the street to just reminence on what used to go down in ma soon to be ex neighbor hood. I said bye to all of my homies and pimperachies(lol) and i cried the whole time and up till that moment i didn't know that they actually loved me because they boo hoo cried even the guys got teary eyed. I finished my good byes and went home and packed then cried my self to sleep even tho i was happy i jus didnt wanna leave.
ring~ring~ ring my alarm clock went off and and my dumb self got up and put on my clothes did my hair and PUT MY BACKPACK ON. I walked out of my room and my mom said: y/m: where u goin y/n: 2 school to get my edumacation like u told me 2 cause if u want me to stop i( got cut off) y/m: you dumba$$ u not goin to school u goin to the airport im standin there lookin all dumb y/n: uhh so thats why im smarter than u cuz i go to school now wut y/m: shut up tweedle dee and tweedle dumb
I finally came to my sences and said my goodbyes to my bros, ma sis, and my nephews
We made it to te airport and my uncle met us there and we both headed back to atl
Uncle Jamie: wake up Princecess of atl y/n:we here already U/j: yep lets go
we got off the plane and got my luggage which was all of my 20 thousand suitcases
y/n: jamie am i gonna like it here? u/j: yeah sweety u gonna luv it y/n: i hope so cause ~ouch ( i hit the ground) m/v: im so sorry miss i guess i wasn't watching y/n: o its ok i stood up and we made eye contact
y/n:omg m/v: hey don say nuttin me and my bros jus got here and we don't wanna attract attention m/v: i wish we could talk more because u seem intereting hey heres my cell number just hit us up and we can jus hang y/n: yo thanx cause i know u know this place and i need someone to show me around.
Who is this mystery guy? Bump if u want more. Trust me it gets hot later believe me i jus need 3 bumps iight
|
|
|
Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 19, 2005 6:00:33 GMT -4
I see how yall is no bumps but oh well keep hatin but im still gone keep goin cuz im bored
~recap~ y/n:omg m/v: don say nuttinme and my bros jus got here and we don't wanna attract attention y/n:i wish we could talk more because u seem interesting hey heres my cell number hit us up and we can just hang y/n:yo thanx cause i know u know this place and i need someone to show me around. ~end recap~ ~y/n pov~ man carnell is so foine and him and his bros want ME to come hang hellz yeah imma love it here ~end pov~
carnell: you know wut u can come to the mall wit us right around 4 or 5 if its ok wit him (pointin to uncle jamie) y/n: well i was plannin on hangin wit( cut off) u/j: jus go this is a once in a lifetime experience and i don want u to miss it u/j: do you know where the 15 and sunset is cause i live right there carnell: uh yeah we live over there carnell: what time should we pick u up? y/n: how bout 4 carnell: ok see u then
I say bye to the boys and there mom and gave them my cell number so if they needed directions and set off to uncle jamies house to get ready. Right when i hit the door cause just screamed cause i was excited. My uncle showed me my room and i unpacked made my room comfortable and looked for my brown and white babyphat tube top and my brown volure pants( my fave outfit). I did my hygene thing and straightened my shoulder length extra curly hair and put on a lil eyeliner and lipgloss
~Ugot , Ugot , Ugot me ~ my cell rang and it was kelly kellz: yo we need directions so I gave him directions and come to find out he jus cross the street and go 3 houses down weird huh The boys rang the doorbell and my uncle answered the door and i ran as fat as i could down the stairs trying not to trip on my untied laces of my matchin chucks.I hit the bottom of the stairs and it got quiet all of a sudden with all of there jaws droppin. I knew i looked hot but not that hot makin them all hot in bothered. Carnell: uhhh ummm you you ready y/n: yeah lets go dustin: what time do u want us to get her back u/j: umm as long as she checks in dustin: iight we headed out to the escalade and to find 4 girls packed in the middle seat dustin: yo y/n this is my girl shauna, pats girl charmaigne,kelly'z girl mercedes, and brians fling serena(shout outs to all of my best friends yez zurr) y/n:wait nana shauna hyper a$$ shauna omg baby its me nene (yo nick name) shauna: omg chicca you grew up y/n: cuz u know know how i dooz it dustin: yall know each other shauna: yeah she like my lil sis i had to move away tho so we aint seen each other in a minute pat: well lets jus go b4 she gotta go to sleep we get to the mall and we all split up dustin,nana, brian, and serena go one way, kelly and mercedes go the other and pat and charmaigne go another way it was just me and carnell left thank god ~y/n pov~ omg us alone fo sho to the fullest ~end pov~ Carnell: where u wanna go first y/n: i wanna go to foot locker cause i wanna get some nikes( the one in the comercial wit venus or serena the boots them is hard) carnell: iight i was hopin u said that we start walkin to footlocker and he jus askin me all these questions carnell: soooo u got a man y/n: no i did but u cant seem to trust peeps these days ~carnell pov~ i don wanna be allup in er biznazz so ill jus leave it alone ~end pov~ we got tothe store and we wuz clownin on the ugly shoez peeps was picken after we bought our shoes till we was kicked out it was funny. We went to a few other stores and had a great time till this guy comes up to me and grabs my a$$ and pushes me against one of the counters when the clerk wasn't lookin carnell walks out of the dressin room carnell: now u cant say that i don look sxxy in this he spotted me wit an uncomfortable look on my face and was pissedwhen he spotted the guy the guy: u scream ill kill u ~y/n pov~ omg god my first day here and imma die plzz come out carnell plzz ~endpov~ carnell: what u doin on ma girl ~y/n pov his girl wow never heard that one ~end pov~ t/g: man jus back away and there will be no problems y/n: get the hell off me t/g: jus shut up carnell: b!t(h get the hell off my girl dustin walks in wit shauna and the lil kids dustin: u heard wut he said t/g: wut u gon do dustin: launch ma foot up in yo a$$ t/g: u know wut fo get it jus know u gon get urs girl (pointin at me) carnell seen the fear in my face when he said that and asked me if i was ok cnelly: u ok cuz i would want nuttin to happen to ne one like u y/n: yeah im fine cnelly: u wanna go to the cndy store and get some ice cream cones y/n: and some skittlez cnelly: u and pat got that bad girl but its wut ever tho we go get our goodies our goodies our goodies not our goodies j/k had to add that we sat down on a bench while every one else finished shoppin cnelly: about me callin u ma girl ( cut off) y/n: yeah i know you jus wanted to scare the guy oh and i want to thank you for helpin me but i still gotta watch ma back tho cnelly: no i really meant that i know its soon and all but you seem like what im lokin for and im lovin it like mickey deez so will you be ma girl fo real y/n: omg yeah cause i know almost every thing bout u and i do like u alot and man im speechless cnelly: well don be u can say ne thing 2 me i listen especially when theres a fine girl he leans in and we kiss long and passionate it was so good like the best ive had in my 13 years kelly:(clears throat) umm u ready to umm go u lil nasties y/n&cnelly: lol yeah we head back to my house so i could check in.I change my clothers i put on my pjs and gave the girls some extra pjs to wear. We went to the boys house ~on the way to the boys house~ nana: so wuts uo wit u and carnell y/n:omg where do i start man first he helped save my life then he calls me his girl then he buys me some skittlez and that is very impotant of course and now he is officially mine today omg i would never dream of bein wit carnell breeding man thas crazy nana: girl now u part of the family lol ~ at the boys house~ lilb: u finally got a girl man and after me to god dang cnelly: u know wut u wouldn have serena if it wasnt fo me so don talk $h!t kelly: how was the kiss wit that girl ~ill write more so bump plzz i need bumps thi is n't allof it i jus need to get off for my mom she set tripperlol naw she gotta check her emails so show some love
|
|
|
Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 19, 2005 11:57:49 GMT -4
bump x1,000,000,000,000,000,000,0000,
|
|
|
Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 19, 2005 19:05:15 GMT -4
idk how to post pics so just imagine you look like tia and tamara or rihanna which ever one is better
~recap~ ~at the boys house~ lilb:u finally got girl man and after me too god dang cnelly:u know wut u wouldn have serena if it wasn for me so don talk $h!t kelly:how was the kiss wit that girl ~end recap~ cnellly: why u wanna know kelly: cause i had fine girls b4 but not that fine cnelly:yo back off ma girl b4 u gat a beat down mrsb:who got a girl dustin: ur baby carnell cnelly: shut up mrsb: hey no need 4 that yall stop but who is this girl cnelly: her name is y/n but u can call her nene tho mrsb:when am i gonna meet her cnelly:in a minute shes comin back wit the girls she live across the street wit her uncle jamie mrsb: u mean james i know him ive seen pics of her and she is a big catch good job carnell
we made it to the boys house.Mrs b answered the door and invited us in. mrsb: u must be y/n i finally get to meet u ive knew ur uncle for a minute but any ways make ur self at home and immago get ready for work we watched a lil tv till mrs b left y/n: yo im bored lets do sumthin nana: like wut y/n: idk u pic dustin: i know wut i wanna do of course lets go nana so u can get dressed into somethin more comfortable y/n: ooh get em nana wear him out dustin: ey don give her no ideas nana: it was gonna be that way any wayz they head up stairs lilb: umm if she she got pjs on why doshe gotta get more comfortable kelly: shut up brian and yall head up stairs and go to sleep lilb&serena: why kelly: cause ma said oh and she has to spend the night cause her mom had to work late I took them upstairs and made sure they went to sleep i came back down stairs and it was jus carnell down there y/n: where every body at cnelly: to do the nasty as usual lets go watch movies in my room y/n: like what cnelly: sumthin scary of course y/n: ohhh yeeeaah so we went to his room which was pretty nice and i founda apic of me that he had taken 4rm his ma kinda awkward huh but i thought it ws cute in a way. 30 mins later we got halfway through the movie and we began to talk wit me on hit chest cnelly: y/n y/n: huh cnelly: do u like me i mean not jus for money y/n: i know its soon but i love you for u and only u. i can admit that i just liked u for ur looks b4 i met u but i got to know u and i truly do love u cnelly: i was jus makin sure we felt the same way y/n: but u cant help but love me lol cnelly: ok don act conceted like kelly now i set up and sat on top of him and we jus looked in each others eyes and i reached in too kiss him and it seemed better than the other one b4 u know it he was kinda on top of me u know like part of him was on me and we were into the kiss far his hand started to go up my shirt and i was lovin it like mickey dees but before we took it further i had to stop him y/n: wait are we finna do the do cause i never one it b4 cnelly:neither have i but i have a pretty good i dea but if you don wanna well we can stop y/n: no its ok but im not havin a baby tho he did what he had to do and wegot into the do u know i cant say cause theres lil kids tears ran down my face and i was crying of pain cnelly: r u ok we can stop if u wanna y/n: no im fine im jus startin to get into it i started to bleed a lil but then i was feelin good i wont get to details cuz i got respect for myboy carnell but i jus wanted to make the story juicy and all so sorry carnell i luv u when we were done i laid on is chest and we said nothin we jus sweated y/n: i think im gonna take a shower can i use ur bathroom ( he got his own bathroom) cnelly: yeah umm do u want me to come with y/n: yeah cause theres no point of me runnin out the hot water then u gettin in but no nastiness cause im tired we got cleaned up and i layed on the bed after i got dressed and fell straight to sleep mrsb came back around 2 and she found me and carnell sleep so she called my uncle mrsb:hey james umm nene fell asleep and i was wonderin if u wanted me to wake her up or jus let her stay the night u/j: umm you can let her sleep and is it ok if she stay over 2 morrow night cause im goin out of town mrsb: oh yeah she can shes always welcome and i wanted her to stay till the boys leave and that will be like in 2 days there goin to new york so i jus wanted her to spend some time with them b4 they left u/j:of course well i gotta go cause i gotta leave for the air port at six mrsb:ok well bubbye
it was a few months later and me and carnell was doin great no fights wut so ever or so i thought
~shake that laffy~ carnells cell rang and he was no where to be found i guess he was in the shower after his long trip cause he wanted to smell good for me since we havent seen each other in a while. I answered his cell thinkin maybe it was his manager but it wasn't y/n: hello f/v:is carnell there y/n: umm yeah but hes in the shower may i ask whos speaking f/v: tell him his girl called y/n:wait his girl iknow for damn sure i didn't call his cell cause im right here f/v: b!t(h this be shurice u donknow who u messin wit y/n: aww hell naw girl u gon have wuts comin to ya so just be prepared f/v:what eva~click~ carnell came walkin into the room and i jus lost it y/n: (wit tears in my eyes )who is shurice can u tell me that cuz im clueless cnelly:baby its not wut u think y/n: naw it's exactly what ithink i ran out the house and sat on their porch. i happened to look up and see someone coming from the way of my backyard fence i tied to focus to see who it was. we made eye contact and i jus freaked out.the guy looked at me with an evil grin. ~y/n pov~ omg it's.........
who is it? what will happen next? who was the girl? is carnell cheating?
Bump to find out plzz show some love
|
|
|
Post by ~!Jazzy!~ on Nov 20, 2005 1:28:29 GMT -4
|
|
|
Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 20, 2005 3:49:47 GMT -4
wow i didnt know it was that good ill write more now ~recap~ i ran out the house and sat on their porch.i happened to look up and see someone coming from the way of my backyard fence i tried to focus to see who it was.we made eye contact and i jus freaked out.the guy looked at me and gave me an evil grin. ~y/n pov~ omg its.... the guy from the mall ~end pov ~ i ran in the house and carnell wa headed straight for me to hug me i pushed pass him and ran straight for dustin. y/n: omg dizzy hes here hes at my house i cant go home omg wut am i gonna do dizzy:girl calm down and who is at ur house y/n:the guy(out of breath) from the mall dizzy ran to get his mom and his friends that came over they went to check it out dizzy:yo nene stay in the house wit carnell they walked out side and didn't see any one but they did see a all white astro van with no windows but only with dark tent in the front u know how those rapist vans look lol. they walked towards the back yard fence and started to crack it open.
~with carnell & y/n~ carnell: are u ready to listen to me y/n: wut ever carnell carnell: look she is a crazed fan who bryan gave my number to and shes been callen for a while now u can ask any one y/n: oh really so if i ask dizzy he will tell me the truth cause he is like my big bro and he never lies so wut ever he says imma believe carnell:wut ever floats your boat ~back wit dizzy and every 1~ they cracked the fence open a little more and they walked in all hudle up they see some one tryna get in the window and he happened to have a box of video cameras i guess to put hidden cameras in the rooms or somethin what ever phsyco peeps do. dizzy :yo wut are u doin man get outta here cuz i told u i would launch my foot in yo a$$ so be a froggy and leap t/g:i dont have time for this imma have to take u out(reaching for i guess would be a gun) dustin ran and tackled the guy and they restled on the floor his homies ran up to him and and was beatin the$h!t out of him and mrs b was steady screamin. dizzy: yo jonnie get her outta here take her home the guy finally successfully pulled out his gun and his other homie backed away and dizzy is gettin at the guy pretty good all of a sudden~BANG~
~back wit y/n &carnell~ carnell: i really want u to believe me y/n: its not that i don believe u its jus i wanna know for sure carnell: can u jus take my word for it i started 2 cry and i realized he would have nuttin to lie to me about. i looked up at him and he wiped my tears away and we got closerall of a sudden ~BANG~ Y/N: OMG DUSTIN carnell: omg lets go we ran outside towards my back yard you see dustin laying on top of the guy there was blood every where u couldnt tell who was shot y/n:OMG DUSTIN PLZZ NO BABY DON DO THIS TO ME the guy got up and ran. i ran to him and turned him over. y/n: where are u hurt baby dizzy: ow my side y/n: ok dont move i took off my sweater and cushioned the wound. after i seen more blood commin out i just passed out
u know wut to do bump for more
|
|
|
Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 20, 2005 12:44:09 GMT -4
BUMP x 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,0000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000
|
|
|
Post by ~!Jazzy!~ on Nov 21, 2005 6:02:45 GMT -4
ADD MORE NOW OR I WILL HURT U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NAW JUSS PLAYIN JUSS HURYY UP AND RITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
|
|
|
Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 21, 2005 8:46:09 GMT -4
wat she said^^^^^^
|
|
|
Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 22, 2005 0:47:22 GMT -4
im gonna rite more but my momma trippen right now
|
|
|
Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 22, 2005 9:03:47 GMT -4
ok well just hurry i luv this story sooooooo much
|
|
|
Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 22, 2005 11:01:23 GMT -4
~recap~ y/n:OMG DUSTIN PLZZ NO BABY DON DO THIS TO ME the guy got up and ran. i ran to him and turned him over. y/n: where r u hurt baby dizzy:ow my side y/n:ok don move i took off my sweater and cushioned his wound. after i seen all the blood commin out ~end of recap~ i woke up in a hospital room. I looked over and every one was jus starin at me. thas prolly why i woke up cuz it felt weird y/n:h.. h.. hi peeps e/b:hey y/n: ey can yall stop burnin a hole through me e/b:oh sorry carnell: are u ok baby y/n: yeah im ok but why yall in here and not in dustins room pat: they said we cant go in there jus then the doc walks in doc: yall can go in now pat: hey let nene go in(remember thas ur nickname) carnell: yeah cuz right when she get up im stealin her bed y/n: be my guess i followed the doc to dizzy's room. i went in and seen dustin watchin tv y/n:omg dizzy r u ok (startin to get teary eyed) dizzy: don cry please y/n: i cant help it i feel its my fault u got hurt dizzy: how tell me how u feel that y/n: cuz u kno if i didnt look as good as i do that guy wouldnt have tryed to kill me in the mall and then go to my house and try to stalk me dizzy: don get big headed. ok lets get off the subject cuz its over rated lol y/n: man i still need to apologize to carnell cuz i didnt believe him dizzy: carnell told me to tell u something y/n: like wut dizzy:well he was tellin me that he wanted to marrie u one day but he didnt tell me to tell u that but he said to tell u to believe him and jus let it role off ur back and that hes got a suprise for u at home
ey i gotta go to school so bump
|
|
|
Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 22, 2005 19:41:53 GMT -4
where i left off: ~y/n pov~ i wonder what he wants god i hope its not bad. but it cant be bad cuz he said he wantd to marie me one day ~end of pov~ i broke out in tears when i started to think wut would happen to me when i thought about the guy jus goin free dizzy: omg don cry i am tired of seein peeps cry y/n: negro no one luv u dizzy: thas cold y/n: i kno lol naw j/p but its not that dizzy: then wut is it cuz i kno nothins more important than me of course y/n: no im serious what am i gonna do the guy is roming free i cant tell my mom cuz shes gonna make me come back an i dont wanna man i dont kno wut to do big bro its gonna depress me dizzy: ey baby don worry as long as you got a good man by ur side and some kinda big and lil bros to stick wit u y/n: thas true well imma stop thinkin bout it but yeah i gotta go cuz they gettin ready to discharge me so when im done imma come back dizzy: no u go home and get some rest but be careful and lock everything that can lock and make sure ur uncle kno u there y/n:iight boo call me if you need me ok and i love u bro and always remember that i gave him a hug and a kiss on the cheek and went to my room to get discharged y/n:ey yall can go in now but when i get discharged imma go home cuz he told me to get some rest carnell: im commin with u y/n: no u stay wit ur bro carnell: no u cant be alone y/n: ok but first we gotta go to the cafferteria and get some skittles(I luv skittles prolly more than pat well neva mind he eat packs back to back) carnell:ok im down i got discharged and got dressed then we went to get our goodies and all we finally got my uncle to drop us off at my house. u/j: yall be careful im goin to the mall for a suit i gotta date y/n: ooh get uncle we settle in by now its like 3:00pm carnell:ey nene im gonna go to my house real quick to gt my celly and check when our flight is will u be ok y/n: yeah imma go to sleep carnell left and went to his house and i guess he left the door unlocked cuz u wont believe what happens im laying there dozing off then i hear a crash like the door swung open and hit the wall y/n: hey baby u there and did u bring my chocolate covered donuts (they good) there was no answer i got up and went to go see if he had brought me my donuts cuz he liked trickin me y/n: boy i aint playin games i want my donuts i walked down the hall and noticed the front door was locked every kinda way wit the dead bolts and stuff piled in front of it y/n:carnell whats wrong with u (saying under breath)( i kno im makin her seem clueless but i gotta make the story juicy) i start to wake up out of my sorta daze and begin to kno wut might be goin on i walk into the kitchen makin sure he couldnt hear me just in case it was that phsyco guy i grabbed a knife and i turn around someone grabs my arm and punched me the guy had to drag me to my room cause i am pretty damn heavy fo and 110 pounder lol i finally came to as he jus got me to my bed i noticed there was another guy there maybe late teens the original guy was about mid twenties y/n: plzz dont don nothin to me Plzz the guy: yo ty get me the rope and scissors i thought he was gonna cut me or somethin ty closed all the blinds while the other guy started to tie me up i found out that he was jus gonna cut my clothes off after he tied me up the guy began to undress ~wit carnell~ i made it back to her house but the door is locked
sorry i got another interruption so imma finish later what is carnell gonna do ? what is the guy gonna do to her? bump and find out
|
|
|
Post by carnellsboo4eva on Nov 22, 2005 20:32:14 GMT -4
HEYYYYYYYYYY! BUMP IT UP!
|
|
|
Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 22, 2005 21:21:47 GMT -4
bump this shit up
|
|