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Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 22, 2005 21:22:48 GMT -4
jasmine y u change the thing 2 nuts instead of sh!t?
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Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 23, 2005 2:31:10 GMT -4
lol im gonna do that jus be patient
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Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 23, 2005 8:39:04 GMT -4
ok
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Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 24, 2005 14:16:17 GMT -4
HAPPY THANX GIVIN N THANX 4 BUMBIN MY STORY BUTI CANT FINISH IT RIGHTNOW THO CUZ IM JUS CHECKIN MY MESSAGES
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Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 24, 2005 16:36:57 GMT -4
~recap~ ~wit carnell~ i made it back to her house but the door was locked ~end recap~ carnell tried every thing he could to try and get the door open cuz he knew somethig had to be wrong cuz that same van wuz parked a few house down across the street ~wit y/n~ y/n: OMG PLZZ DON DO THIS TO ME PLZZ TY: SHUT UP THE LESS U SCREAM THE EASIER IT WILL BE OK the guy ordered ty to have is way with me first.he started to kiss on my neck and felt on me. i guess this is wut it feels like when u say no of course. he put on his protection and began to go in me hard as i don kno wut all i kno was that it hurt like hell. i started to scream but he jus hit me. he started to go harder and harder the more i made a sound. guess i started to bleed cuz i felt something warm trickling down my leg i jus cried cuz i knew if i screamed out for carnell he would most likely try to kill me and he would succeed.ty was doin wut he had to do.by now im crying harder than i ever did put all together in my whole life. t/g:my turn ~wit carnell~ carnell started to panic he looked in around for the key hide away but jus looke at the key and thought if would bust in him and y/n would be killed so he dialed 911 and told them every thing all the way down from the mall which he didnt need to but thas ow panicked he was the were ont there way. ~wit y/n ~ y/n: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW T/G:SHUT UP AND TAKE WUTS GIVIN TO U the guy was doin in even harder than ty was. i thoght i was gonna die i actually wanted to die to get rid of this pain. i bit my lip them sreamed even louder y/n: HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP PLLLLZZ CAAARNEEEEELL
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Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 24, 2005 17:20:44 GMT -4
SORRY THE COMPUTER WAS TRIPPEN SO IT KINDA SENT IT EARLY
I began to pray both for life and death i wasnt sure what i wanted i jus wanted something to make it end. i cried even more then i got light headed and passed out.
the police finally arrived and they were tryna bust the door down but it ad too mush stuff in front of it then they went to all of the windows and busted them thy got in with the swat team and began to sweep the house. the guy and his accomplice heard the noise and the guy hurried and finishe up and from wut he thought he beat me to death but he dint really succeed at it. they busted my window open and hopped out once outside ........... police: FREEZE the guys were arrested and i was being prepped to go to the hospital carnell was right by my side the whole time he called his family and informed them on what happened they were all shocked especially dustin and shauna i began tocome to as the paramedics finally got all of the tape and rope from my arms and my bed post. i must have been bleeding alot from when they raped me and on top of that they had almost beat me to death. the paramedics checked to see if i had a concussion and to their supprise i didnt as bad as i looked they loaded me onto the truck with carnell by hand and once again i passed out from the pain but for way longer this time. ~at the hospital~ the breedings, theboys girlfriends and my uncle was already up there bfore i got ther becuz of dustin and where my uncle came from was close tothe hospital they rushed me away to clean me up and get me ready for my room. it was kinda weird cuz i was inthe hospital twice within an hour and thirty minutes. about an hour later the docter told them that they were aloud in and eveybody voted for carnell to go in carnell was shocked when he seen me but i was still out like like cornrolls on a basketball player(lol i jus made that up lol) carnell began to cry histerically becaus ehtis time he could tell where i was hurt compared to earlier when i was covered in blood. carnell: omg baby plzz im so sorry i shouldnt have worried bout my phone i should have stayed with u at least i would took half of the beating instead of u gettin it bad baby i hope u can forgive me plzz baby i don wnt u to go i seriouly dont want u to i woul have nothin without u as much fans i have it wont compare to u baby man now u wont forgive me i dont blame u i wouldnt forgive myself for that. y/n: carnell (soundin drained) carnell: omg are u ok y/n:idk i think so how do i look cuz if i look bad guaranteed im not ok he pulled out a mirror out of my purse that he had been holing for me i looked into the mirror and noticed i could only open one eye and my face was swollen as i don kno wut y/n:omg carnell i don want u tosee me like this (crying now) carnell: its all my fault i shouldnt have left u there y/n: no its my fault u didnt do any thing i shoulda stayed here with dustin i shouldnt have let him talk me into making me go home carnell: lets jusnot talk about it lets jus be thankful u r alive we cried a lil and we both fell asleep
~ a month later ~ i woke up and cleaned up did my girlie thing u kno how that goes i lookedin the mirror and stared at the gash i had 4rm the whole ordeal it was right above my eye brow but it was no biggie. i beagn to remember what happened to me and got teary eyed and looked away from the mirror sometimes i actually felt like ending my life when i thought about what happened. ever since ten my mom calle every day to make sure i was alright. u/j: ey y/n come down stairs i wanna show u somehting ~y/n pov~ i wonder what he got me cuz i kno he aint never got nothin to show me i mean come on its my birthday ~end pov~ i sat there thinking on how my on and only baby couldnt be there and it would jus be me, mrs b, my uncle , and his newly found girl friend who is tight as hell by the way i but on my make up thinkin how no one special was gonna see it and i put the last finishin curls in my hair and headed downstairs. i got down stairs closing my eyes when i did my daily gigantic yawn i limped my way to the kitchen and i got done with my yawn and i opened my eyes and then e/b: SUPPRISE !!!!!!!!!!!!! DO U LIKE? BUMP IF U DO. IS THE PARTY GONNA BE A HIT OR NOT ? IDK BUMP TO FIND OUT.
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Post by ~!Jazzy!~ on Nov 24, 2005 20:12:03 GMT -4
ME AND MY CUZ BRYANSBABIIBOO LLLLLLLLLUUUUUUUUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUMP THIS SH!T UP TO DA FULLEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 25, 2005 11:36:06 GMT -4
yea wat my cuz said
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Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 25, 2005 11:36:53 GMT -4
it's bryansbabiiboo i just changed my name 2 bryansbabii4lyfe
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Post by patrickbabiigurl on Nov 25, 2005 21:52:20 GMT -4
bump bump bump
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Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 26, 2005 0:56:48 GMT -4
wat she said^^^^^^^^^
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Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 28, 2005 3:46:43 GMT -4
~RECAP~ e/b:supprise ~end recap~ y/n:O......M......GOD(in a high pitched voice)
i was really supprised my mom was there and so were my siblings Richard,Raeanna, and Sakai and my sis's son y/n:omg i so happy yall here and for my 14th bday yez zurr u kno its gon be krunk i stopped my self and began to think of my baby carnell and his bros which were like mine too i sat at the counter while my sis turned on some music. she turned on all i do well the instrumental of all i do and i knew somethin was up cuz my sis couldnt stand b5 she thought they were cute but didnt like there music mysteryvoice: wus up? how u doin? u kno i been seein you 4rm across the room and umm......... i stood up well i had to kinda jump off the chair cuz u kno im kinda short but i dont like to admit it y/n:AWWWW I SCREAMED LIKE I JUS MET B5 THAS HOW HAPPY I WAS carnell came up to me in the middle of the song and kissed my hand the song ended and i didnt want it to because they danced so cute especially brian i walked up to carnell and embrasses him and it kinda scared him but he accepted me tho cnelly:man i missed u so much i havent seen u since like yeah (changing the subject)umm lets clear the furniture for the party y/n:(nervous)yeah... WAIT PARTY NOW WE REALLY GON GET KRUNK about fifteen minutes later the door bell rang and i answered and saw it was like all the teens in the neighbor hood i was excited we got the party started and i didnt really feel as satisfied as i should have u/j:y/n me ,ur mom, lil bro, and ur nephew are going out so yall can do wut yall do best y/n: yez zurr cuz thas how we pop it i was glad they were leavin so we could relly get it popin ray(sis):hey carnell dance cuz u look square in the corner like that my sis and carnell danced and i laughed at there stupidity takin over the way they were dancin every boby wuz rollin they finally stop then my fave song rihanna hol up peeps trippen
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Post by Bryans #1 Luva on Nov 28, 2005 18:36:31 GMT -4
bumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbump this shit up 2 da fullest
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Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 28, 2005 20:58:48 GMT -4
ok back to where i was b4 my lil bros daddy rudely interrupted
they finnally stopped and then my fave song by Rihanna came on called luvin that u want or somethin i didnt kno the name to save my life y/n:oooh snap this my song someone dance wit me so one of my best friends ryan was dancin wit me and for my lower body bein hurt i was gettin off poppin and all. ryan was poppin too he was the type that u may think is gay but he not at all.totally straight we were doin the log on which is a jamaican dance where the boy is in the back and and u not grindin but like your stepin out at the same time but i had enough to be at least 3 inches away cuz u gotta put yo butt like right on the guys goodies carnell walked in after gettin a drink and every one was crowded around us and all i see is ryan flyin to the side of me y/n:omg r u ok ryan looked at me and gestured me to look up and there he was carnell:wut the fukk u doin y/n u gon sit here and be grindin all on this boy i don know y/n:o m fukkin god u r over reactin we werent even touchin and u gon get jealous carnell: u little lie u bitch dont even talk to me any more since u wanna be a hoe u already lost ur virginity at 13 the whole room got quiet the music stopped and everything y/n: (starting to cry but holdingit back) u... u.... u piece of sh!t i hate u i ran off to my room and locked the door carnell: run off my bro richard:u kno wut u lucky u dustin lil bro cuz i would whoop that azz and that was jus uncalled for(then walkin off to find me) my bro knocked on the door richard:baby envy u ok(another nickname)(thas my stage name so listen out for envy iight in real life) y/n:go away (sobbing)plzz richard:well u need to come back down cuz its ur party and u cant jus leave ur friends i unlocked the door and he wiped away my tears i walked down the stairs us laughin and carryin on my bro left me to go get me something to eat to make me feel better kelly:ey y/n umm i think u should look over there i looked over and saw carnell all hugged up wit the neighborhood hoe a darlene aka cookie i walked up witout sayin a word and socked the sh!t outta her y/n:(jumpin on top of her) don ~HIT~eva~HIT~TOUCH~HIT~HIT~my man ~spit~ i turn around and ~SMACK~ Y/N:DON EVA EVA FEEL U CAN DO THIS TO ME TALKIN BOUT ME BEIN A HOE AND ME NOT HAVIN MY VIRGINITY IS UR FAULT URS OK U UNDERSTAND THAT DON TOUCH ME DON TALK TO ME DON EVEN GLANCE MY WAY I HATE U I WANT U OUTTA MY LIFE ITS OVER E/B:OOOOH u got served i run outside kelly runs after me and saw me sitting in the swing chair jus cyin my eyes out kelly:(sittin next to me)u ok y/n:YEAH JUS PEACHY MY BOYFRIEND SAID I WAS A HOE THEN I CATCH HIM HANGING ON ONE AIN THAT BOUT A B!T(H kelly: u got a point there y/n: i cant believe him (starting to cry)i thought he loved me i thought i could rely on him for any thing and he pulls this sh!t man i liked him no actually i loved him and he gon sit there andsay thas y im not a virgin man he was my first and only.......well yeah almost kelly:i dont know wut came over him he NEVER does that y/n:u promise not to say ne thing kelly:yeah wut is it y/n: well ever since i was little i had a near death experience and well i after that i always get a weird feelin when somethin is about to happen and usually a dream to go along wit it kelly: do u know wut it might be y/n: i have a clue but im not quite sure but the dream was where i was seeing everything livin and beautiful then i see cars then everything goes black kelly:maybe it means ur blind to somethin but i don know what the car thing was about tho y/n: idk but yeah i kno its not more important than wut happened 2day kelly: jus drop wut happened cuz i kno he still luvs u tho babygurl cuz u sweet and as pretty as can be he cant stay away for long he put his arm around me and kissed my forehead y/n:thanx kelz i needed that we waited outside till the party ended and i said my good byes to them as the left i looked inside the house and to my supprise it was spotless we continued to have fun on the porch and we seen carnell come out with a very depressed look on his face and i thought i saw a tear and asked him if he was ok y/n: u ok carnell:(silent runnin to his house stormin past his mom as she came across the street) mrsb: oook well i jus came to see how the party turned out cuz i only had enogh time to say happy birthday to u earlier and come home 4 my stories y/n: lol thas ok but it turned out fine but then it turned sour kelly:ill explain it later ma mrsb: r u still on for spendin the night so we can have fun jus me and u doin gurl things y/n:(i sisnt wanna say no )uh yeah sure mrsb left and and we sat there in silence for a minute or two and then
~pop pop pop~
yez zurr this is hot huh bump it like b2k ok and ill post more
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Post by red4vegasmixedmami on Nov 29, 2005 1:13:28 GMT -4
EY YALL IM SORRY I DIDNT GIVE U A CHANCE TO BUMP BUT IM REALLY BORED AND IM EXCITED WIT WUT IM GONNA PUT I HOPE YALL LIKE AND IF YALL DON PLZZ TELL ME HOW I CAN IMPROVE IT AND YALL CAN GIVE ME IDEAS TOO BUT I GOTTA GIVE PROPS TO MY GURL THAT WROTE THE STORY CALLED TOUCHED ON THE S13 FORUM MAN ITS HOT GO CHECK IT OUT ~RECAP~ ~POP POP POP~ Y/N:OMG IT SOUND LIKE SOMEONE SHOOTIN KELLY:GET DOWN(HE PULLS ME DOwn) i see like five people runnin including a 7yr old i got up and rushed for her because she had fell L/g:(crying) y/n:its ok baby don panic i picked her up and we had jus got to our feet and then ~POP~ the lil gurl runs when kelly gestured her to and they ran and hid behind the porch under the porch i felt a sharp pain in my leg. i look down and saw the redness of my body poring out. i stand there in agony and pain not knowin where i was ~POP~ kelly:(STARTING TO CRY)NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO this is the closest ive ever felt to wanting to just end my pain, end my life from jus know knowin negative things will keep on pressing in my life i clutch my chest blood slipping through my fingers jus as i thought of my life. i hear a car speed away. i thought it was the end when i seen my life flash b4 my eyes. i glance over to see kelly screaming, for some reason i couldnt hear him or any other person screamin for me. ~y/n pov~ dear god, y must u torchure thee. y must u taunt this innocent life that worships u on hand and foot. i must be in ur heart now. i feel my life is slipping away and im in ur hands now. i don know wut ive done wrong. plzz let my family know i love them and tell carnell im sorry and i do forgive an forget. like i said my life is in ur hands now so u must have a valid reason for taking me. either this or u r trying to turn me for the better. let me hope this isnt my last breath so now i pray for better...................................................................................................... now i lay me down to sleep, i pray thy lord my soul to keep. if i should die before i wake, i pray thy lord my soul to take. -amen ~end pov~ i sway from side to side i lost my balance after bein tainted by the darkness. i fall and hit my head on the hood of a car with all im worth.Boom, Im out.
~y/n pov~ i open my eyes in joy hoping to see the heavenly whiteness of heaen but yet i see black ~end pov~ i heard people talking but i couldnt figure out who or WHAT y/n: am i in hell mom:omg my baby..... wait lol no ur not ur here above sea level y/n:mom? is that u ? mom:yeah babe u ok y/n:idk its dark turn on the light (coughs then cringes in pain) doc: hi im the ur doctor and u have ur eyes open so im guessing from the hit on the head caused blindness y/n:(begining to tear up)is it permanent doc:we have to put u through a process of therapy to see if it is but it most likely will be permanent e/b:~gasp~ y/n: mom i...i...cant be mom:were all here for u we will be here evey step of the way babe~sniff~ y/n:~sniff~kelly u there? kellz:yeah baby gurl y/n:do u think this is wut i was talking about kellz: idk~in a sad voice~ y/n:i have a feelin u think its ur fault huh kellz:yeah u read my mind y/n: well its not babe its mine if i never tried to be a hero it wouldnt have happened but im gldad it did because evrything happens for a reason and im not gonna be selfish because i saved her life and almost ended mine no its not that way i saved hers and begab another as far as i kno i can see but in different wat
bump bump bump like b2k iight u kno wut to do wut will she do wit her life? will her and carnell get back together? bump to find out
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